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| talk:alcheringa:1-1:stories_from_the_ifa_oracle_yoruba_40 [2021/06/16 15:49] – dgonsalves33 | talk:alcheringa:1-1:stories_from_the_ifa_oracle_yoruba_40 [2021/06/25 04:00] (current) – admin | ||
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| Initially I thought it was a cool idea to have a subcategory of summaries but I believe it might save you time in the future, if you include that info in the overview. | Initially I thought it was a cool idea to have a subcategory of summaries but I believe it might save you time in the future, if you include that info in the overview. | ||
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| + | Hi, Christopher! Firstly, I love the organization of this wiki page. It's clear and concise, and I really appreciate that. For a suggestion, though, perhaps provide some commentary of your own in the commentary section, sort of giving your own thoughts on the works and why you feel that way. Other than that, though, I think this is a great wiki page. Good job! | ||
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| + | My next step is to flesh out the context to give more information about Orishas and sacrifice (and maybe other elements of Yoruba culture). The commentary section needs a boost but I'm less certain about what to say there. | ||
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| + | This is solid and informative. It might be hard to learn enough to feel you can write a solid commentary, which is fine. What is divination? or a diviner? Can you find evidence of a publication by Beier and Gbadamosi? | ||
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| + | One or two things in the bibliography might help flesh it out. Where, precisely, is Yoruba spoken? (i.e. the modern nations of ...) | ||
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