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| + | I'm confused by the voice in the commentary section for the Flathead prophecy. Is this whole section a quote from your source? I was expecting your voice commenting on the reading. | ||
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| + | One of your bibliography sources is in all caps. Maybe change the capitalization to be consistent? | ||
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| + | Great work on your wiki! Just curious if you want to add a section on the actual eruption of Mount St. Helens under the context section? | ||
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| + | I will revise the commentary section as well as add information about the actual eruption of Mount St. Helens. Thanks for your feedback. | ||
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| + | Lots of fascinating information here. I think this is one of the sources: | ||
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| + | and this is the second one: Kalapuya texts. Part I.Santiam Kalapuya ethnologic ... v.11 1945? | ||
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| + | see pp 67-69 for "A shaman dreamed the earth became black like ploughed land" | ||
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