Serpent and the Fire (p. 422-423)
In the anthology Serpent and the Fire: Poetries of the Americas from Origins to Present, Jerome Rothenberg and Javier Taboada include a translation of José María Arguedas’ poem “Jetman, Haylli (Ode to the Jet Plane)” from Arguedas’ poetry collection titled Katatay.
Written between 1962 and 1969 and published posthumously in 1972, this collection of 7 poems is regarded as the origin of modern Quechua poetry in Peru. Its title means “to tremble” (as in an earthquake) because the poems reflect both cultural changes and innovations in language, which Arguedas called “indigenous vanguardism”. 1) Arguedas wrote the poems using several Quechua dialects and also translated them into Spanish,“in christian and in indian”, in his own words, thus creating a bridge between those two languages and becoming a “cultural mediator” in his first attempt at poetry. His use of the poetic subject wakey runa (hermano, 'brother') can be interpreted as individual or collective, expressing human suffering as a search for meaning that brings nature, men, and gods together in poems that provide an indigenous view of important socio-political moments in history. 2)
For the Serpent and the Fire: Poetries of the Americas from Origins to Present, Arguedas' poem was translated by Javier Taboada. However, Taboada translated the Spanish version of the poem into English. The Spanish version was translated by Alfredo Torero and José María Arguedas. 3) In Spanish, the title of the poem is “Oda al Jet,” and in Quechua, the poem is titled “Jetman, Haylli.”
The Difficulty of Translating Arguedas
It is difficult to find “Ode to the Jet Plane” online, and most articles related to the poem are in Spanish. While this may be a barrier for people who do not speak Spanish, there is an explanation for why so few translations are available to read. In particular, in the introduction to José María Arguedas' novel, Deep Rivers, John V. Murra points out that “Arguedas did not write with us [English speakers] in mind.” 5) Murra then provides an example of this citing a time when “He [Arguedas] was not surprised when a Scottish poet told him he found Los Ríos Profundos [Deep Rivers] untranslatable….he [Arguedas] still saw himself as talking not only about the Andean peoples, but for and to them.” 6) This is hinted at in Rothenberg and Taboada's anthology as they maintain that despite Arguedas' innovative writing style, “for his Quechua readers or listeners, some of the old oral structures remain recognizable.” 7)
The Spanish version (Oda al Jet) is longer than the Quechua version (Jetman, haylli) because when Arguedas rewrites the poem he often adds paraphrases that explain and add to the meaning of the verse in Quechua, attempting, in his own words, “a true, non-literary translation” that avoids elements that are not present in the text in Quechua. He also incorporates culturally foreign terms into Quechua. For example, when the lyrical speaker invokes the Trinity in Quechua (“Dios Yaya, Dios churi, Dios Espíritu Santo”), there is an indigenization of these Christian symbols: Dios Yaya literally translates as ‘man/woman of God’, but it appears as Dios Padre in Spanish; churi is literally ‘son of the father’, but it is translated as Dios hijo. 8)
The poem has the expressive tone of a pre-Hispanic Quechua song and its lyrical speaker voices admiration for a modern object, the jet plane, using animal and nature metaphors –distinctive features of Quechua culture– to describe it: “wind-fish”, “swallow-fish of wind”, “flying fire”, “golden-and-heavenly- swallow”, “immense snow-bird”. 9)
Key Terms
When attempting to interpret “Jetman, Haylli (Ode to the Jet Plane),” it is important to recognize the various cultural and religious beliefs that are sometimes alluded to and explicitly stated in the poem. Specifically, consider the bulleted list of terms and possible explanations listed below.
The first god is Inkarri, offspring of the Sun and a savage woman. He is the maker of everything that exists on earth. He tied the Sun to the summit of mount Osquonta and locked up the wind in order to conclude his creation. He then decided to found the city of Cuzco and threw a staff of gold from the peak, intending to found the city in the place where the staff fell (they say that the staff fell in the plain of Quellcata that ‘could have been Cuzco’. Inkarri was captured by the spanish king (‘The Inka of the spaniards captured Inkarri, his equal’); he was later decapitated. The head of the god was taken to Cuzco and his body is slowly growing under the earth. As he has no power his laws are not obeyed and his will is not accomplished. When the body of Inkarri is complete he will return, and that day will be the Day of Judgment. As proof that Inkarri is in Cuzco the birds of the coast sing ‘In Cuzco the King’ or ‘Go to Cuzco.’ 20)
*It may be important to note that Pease mentions Arguedas by name in his article.
Possible Interpretations
In a blogpost on WordPress, one user interprets the poem as “Arguedas envis[ioning] a modernity in which Quechua, and indigenous cosmovision, have fully appropriated the fruit of Western technology…” 21)
The poster continues, writing, “The price, or perhaps the advantage, of this techno-indigenism is a blasphemous denial of gods both native and Christian, and an affirmation of the divinity of mankind….” 22)
While the post isn’t technically a scholarly source, the poster does encourage readers to view the poem through a postcolonial lens and provides a starting point for future research. For a more in-depth reading of the poem, readers may want to examine why transportation matters and determine how and why Arguedas used quotation marks throughout the poem.
For those interested in Arguedas' background and his relationship to Quechua, the article "The Quechua World of José María Arguedas" by Earl M. Aldrich Jr. may be helpful.
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