I've become really fascinated with the questions about sources and authenticity raised by the critical review.

Does the El Corno Emplumado publication support the attribution to Jodorowsky? The reviewer's critique now seems a bit slapdash – how does he know that she doesn't speak Quechua? But more to the point, El Corno's lack of an author / translator attribution suggests she may not have been involved at all!

It would be good to track down the source – which is probably the fairly widely published Spanish/Quechua edition.

— admin 2021/06/15 02:18

This looks solid. Make sure your subheadings are marked in the same way. A few are just bold or maybe heading 3 or 4 and not parallel.

I'm no longer sure that the right author/translator is even credited in Alcheringa. Probably those links in the overview could be also spelled out as sources in the bibliography.

This makes Crowley's complaint more of a question – since he doesn't know who translated or how well they were translated.

What are you thoughts? That might belong in the commentary?

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