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Three from Quechua
Overview
This entry contains three poems originally written in Quechua and then translated into Spanish by Peruvian poet Raquel Jodorowsky and then into English by Edward Kissam. These poems have been translated twice from Quechua to Spanish and then from Spanish to English. Attached is the pdf of the poems in English as published by Alcheringa and below are those three poems in Spanish. Two of the Spanish translations below were taken from Spanish translations by Sebastián Salazar Bondy in Poesia Quechua and can be found here and here (Original publication appears to be the Mexican literary journal, El Corno Emplumado, issue 27 - where no author credit is given link)
Commentary
Context
These poems are folkloric Quechua poetry. Quecha poetry was and continues being intimate and sentimental. Amongst the Quechua, poets and singers were almost always youth and young adults.
Criticism of the Translation
Criticisms of the authenticity of translations. In a review of the first issue of Alcheringa, Daniel J. Crowley states the complexity of the task at hand perfectly, ‘No greater problem exists for the unfortunate folklorist than how to convey the unique combination of form, beauty, and meaning expressed in verbal art in one language to the speakers of another.’ However, Alcheringa has taken to task the job of bringing tribal poetry to English readers. While some of the entries are direct translations, others have included notes and commentaries on areas such as translation and performance. At times these oral poems are written using formatting techniques in an attempt to visually depict components such as rhythm and tone. Undertaking such a task does create some difficulties. In Crowley's view, it is quite difficult to complete an exceptional translation that is true to its original meaning without a full understanding of the poem through dialogue with the original poet. Another issue that Crowley raises is the lack of context and function of these compiled poems. He concludes that the result seems to be enjoyable, esthetic poems, but ones that may not shed light on the more obscure experiences and preferences of these more isolated cultures.
Content
The three poems in both English and Spanish. (No Spanish version was provided in original publication).
"Despedida"
(A Spanish translation by Sebastián Salazar Bondy can be found here)
Hoy es el día de mi partida.
Hoy no me iré, me iré mañana.
Me veréis salir tocando una flauta de
[hueso de mosca,
llevando por bandera una tela de araña;
será mi tambor un huevo de hormiga,
y mi montera, ¡mi montera será un nido
[de picaflor!
"Yo Crío Una Mosca"
(A Spanish translation by Sebastián Salazar Bondy found can be found here)
Yo crío una mosca de alas de oro, yo crío una mosca de ojos encendidos
Trae la muerte en sus ojos de fuego, trae la muerte en sus cabellos de oro, en sus alas hermosas.
En una botella verde yo la crío; nadie sabe si bebe, nadie sabe si come.
Vaga en las noches como una estrella, hiere mortalmente con su resplandor rojo, con sus ojos de fuego.
En sus ojos de fuego lleva el amor, fulgura en la noche su sangre, el amor que trae en el corazón.
Nocturno insecto, mosca portadora de la muerte, en una botella verde yo la crío, amándola tanto.
Pero, ¡eso sí! ¡Eso sí! Nadie sabe si le doy de beber, si le doy de comer.
"Que Dolor Soñará"
Spanish translation of this poem on page 81
Su cabellera es su almohada,
sobre su cabellera está durmiendo la niña.
Llora sangre,
no es lágrima su llorar,
llora sangre.
¡Qué soñará la niña
qué dolor soñará!
¡Ay, quien le hirió,
quien le hirió así el corazón!
Sílbale, sílbale, sílbale,
lorito.
Qué despierte
¡qué despierte ya!
sílbale, sílbale,
lorito
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Curl, John. “Ancient American POETS.” Bilingual Review / La Revista Bilingüe, vol. 26, no. 2/3, 2001, pp. iii-163. JSTOR, www.jstor.org/stable/25745755. Accessed 4 June 2021.
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Crowley, Daniel J. “: Alcheringa: Ethnopoetics . Jerome Rothenberg, Dennis Tedlock.” American Anthropologist, vol. 74, no. 6, 1972, pp. 1463–1464., doi:10.1525/aa.1972.74.6.02a00750.
Bondy Sebastián Salazar. Poesía Quechua. Editorial Arca, 1978, archive.org, archive.org/details/poesiaquechua0000unse/mode/2up.
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